The process that took me the most time revising was basically my grammar and spelling. The second part was my paragraph structure and the way I portrayed the story outcomes. In my process I would have not changed anything this is the first time I’ve taken advice from people and changed my essay in the way they suggested. The drafting and revising process was never a thing for me I wrote a paper once and that is how it stayed. This approach fit well with this class because it is all about the process, this paper was nothing but a process. I took steps into this paper. I wrote three different drafts and picked the best one. Drafted more then took my peers advice and wrote my final draft. I honestly could say that I wouldn’t do anything different this process was more difficult then writing one draft and keeping it , but it turned out to be a better paper. I would definitely do this process again for writing papers. It made the good paper into a great paper.