As the workshop is approaching I have a few concerns. The proofreading is always tough for me. I do not have a good eye for realizing grammatical errors or comma placement. I am hoping my peers in class will help me with fixing those errors. Run on sentences also concern me because I have so many ideas, but i do not know how to place them in the paper. My sensory details is also another thing that worries me I feel the details I have put in my paper explain enough to me what is going on but the reader might have trouble taking the journey with me.

The paper i drafted also has highlights I feel I explained my experience well and the reader will be able to understand my transformation.