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Putting someones direct quotes into your paper can greatly influence and give a high credibility to you paper which people will also give attention to because they can see and author or a professor or anyone with higher credibility then us the student is being brought into play. The part of that is the ” look im not just making this stuff up” is way the readers like to see….

Lucas Doucette Miller February 18, 2018 English 123   Draft One:Discourse vs Literacy Narratives   Literacy narratives and Discourses directly correlate to identity or your discourse in gee terms. The influences from you’re writing experiences can shape you as a person. Three essays were used to write this. “Mentee to mentor”, “literacy narrative”, and “Parental Advisory”. Each tell a story from a different point of view that easily show how…

Big Claim: Discourses and literacy narratives correlate When the mentee becomes the mentor: In this article the main idea talks about how this person went from learning to read and write from his grandparents because his parents were to busy. Then he ends up teaching his brother to read and write. This directly correlates to identity because this was a major impact on his life when his parents were not…

In gee a particularly potent example is when he talks about what a discourse actually is and how it actually works. A discourse is a sort of identity kit in which people claim there identity with the what where how. In  William’s piece he talks about how people claim certain identities when writing a narrative so both of these things I can make connections with. Even tho gee says you…

Gee, Alexander, and Williams all answer the so what question to us rarely easily. Even if we don’t want to be intellectually devoted to the papers they are relevant in our english class so in turn they are important to us. The so what question is answered when they talk about literacy narratives. They are a large chunk of what english 122-123 is about and the different variations we have…

In the pages we read Alexander talks about her experiments in the english field and the different polls that were taken during literacy narrative writing. Alexander talks about how some students use mastery narratives when they write about a child prodigy which is something that comes from a strong belief as a child she uses kids who rebel against other classes and strictly read. These are the kids who grow…

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Kara Poe Alexander defines Master Narrative as “an overarching story people tell themselves about their experiences in relation to the culture, literature, or history of a society” if i had to paraphrase what alexander was saying I would say it is problematic because multiple people write stories like our literacy narratives that I basically had myself convinced that I was actually such a hero in my story but really I was…

How different is this new narrative than your project from last term? The new literacy narrative is completely from the mentor figure in my  old stories perspective. I told the story as if i was the teacher who is witnessing what happened and tried to be as blunt and real as possible. Revisit it in order to think in reflective terms. I revisited my old narrative and it seemed like…