In my paper after having three people peer review it.

The main points I will adjust

• I will make sure to put the authors of the literacy narratives in the paragraphs mentioning them.
• While making my first paragraph i will add another in so that I can explain both scholarly articles and also explain and give titles of the LN’s
• I will pull direct quotes from the LN’s so that I can have a conversation in the paper and bring direct facts from the paper instead of my own analysis
• Use Barclay formula in the paragraphs explaining main points.