The readers of Carrs paper are reluctant to believe what Carr is writing because no one wants to believe that technology is taking over. No one wants t0 believe that something the internet is smarter then us even though people created it. The internet has made the human race a lazy race. The part that gives people anxiety to me is what else could go wrong? What else could happen…
Journal #20
In my essay there was specific times when I could have met the journeyman/advanced journey man when 1. I should have had fewer local mistakes in my paper grammar spelling errors very minimal stuff but still I could have edited better. This could include taking more time with the paper trying to turn those mistakes into a learning process for the next paper now that I know how vital those…
journal #19
In this text the author is talking about different inventions around the world that have made someone or multiple peoples lives easier. It also talks about the kind of world we are living in today, and how peoples lives are basically shaped around this technological world. Making things easier is a way where people can become lazy and out of touch with who they really are. Another big point in…
Journal #18
The most valuable piece of technology in my life right now is my phone, and this is not just for the simple fact of social media or anything like that. My phone is light and compact enough to be carried around with me anywhere I go. My phone has my school email on it which is convenient for emailing professors or group members on the go and makes answering faster…
Journal #17 conference reflection
In the back half of this course there are some simple things I can do to succeed. Personally from the meeting I felt that my revision skills need to be more refined and the time I spend revising is something that could also use some revision as well. continuing to keep up with the work that is assigned spend time organizing my priorities within the class (revision time) take feedback…
Journal #16 revision plan
In my paper after having three people peer review it. The main points I will adjust I will make sure to put the authors of the literacy narratives in the paragraphs mentioning them. While making my first paragraph i will add another in so that I can explain both scholarly articles and also explain and give titles of the LN’s I will pull direct quotes from the LN’s so that…
Journal #14
Putting someones direct quotes into your paper can greatly influence and give a high credibility to you paper which people will also give attention to because they can see and author or a professor or anyone with higher credibility then us the student is being brought into play. The part of that is the ” look im not just making this stuff up” is way the readers like to see….
Journal #13 Draft One
Lucas Doucette Miller February 18, 2018 English 123 Draft One:Discourse vs Literacy Narratives Literacy narratives and Discourses directly correlate to identity or your discourse in gee terms. The influences from you’re writing experiences can shape you as a person. Three essays were used to write this. “Mentee to mentor”, “literacy narrative”, and “Parental Advisory”. Each tell a story from a different point of view that easily show how…
Journal #12
Big Claim: Discourses and literacy narratives correlate When the mentee becomes the mentor: In this article the main idea talks about how this person went from learning to read and write from his grandparents because his parents were to busy. Then he ends up teaching his brother to read and write. This directly correlates to identity because this was a major impact on his life when his parents were not…
